Research and Planning: Pitch and Feedback

 

From the feedback that I received, I am aware that the name of my magazine (balance) seemed to be very popular and therefore, i will not be changing it, followed by my intertextuality which has also been shown to be very popular. However, one aspect that i will be changing as a result of the feedback i received is my 30 second video for the website, originally I was going to do a behind the scenes/ day in the life for my models. However, I thought that this wouldn't be as interesting to watch and didn't link to my two aspects of health as well as i wanted it to. Therefore, I am going to take on board the last piece of feedback that  i received, which is to perhaps interview my chosen talents about what it is like to be a dancer facing the challenges of body image and mental health struggles/ obstacles. I think through doing this, I will be more focused on the themes of mental and physical health in my magazine and the 30 second video will perhaps be more on brand and interesting to my audience rather than a behind the scenes/ day in the life.